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All Deviations
All Deviations




"Temperature"

Sunday, May 18th, 2008!


Disclaimer: I do not own Class of the titans, it belongs to Brad Goodchild and the song "Temperature" belongs to Sean Paul.

Couples: ArchieXAtlanta

POV: Archie



"Oh, Archie, Archie..." Neil sighted, smiling.

"What!?" I shouted at Neil for the thousand-million times.

"You can't really control your temper" laughed Neil.

"OH SHUT-UP, NEIL!" I yelled at Neil, throwing a cushion at him.

"Ow! My face! My hair!" yelled Neil, checking himself in the mirror.

"Quiet guys!" Theresa said, brusquely "Atlanta is sick".

"What kind, drama queen?" I asked.

"Temperature" answered Theresa, annoyed "Cheese, Archie? Do you have to be in everyone's buisness?".

"No" I answered "But with Atlanta, yes".

"Temperature reminds me of a song..." started Neil, still fixing himself in the mirror.

"I know. Temperature by Sean Paul" I answered, quietly "You, me and Atlanta loves that song".

"Zzzz" snoozed Neil, napping on the sofa. I'm going upstairs to see Atlanta, I thought, smiling.


Upstairs in Atlanta's room


"Hello?" asked Atlanta, a hand on her forehead.

"It's me" I said, as I entered on the room. I sated next to her.

"So, how was school today, something interesting?" Atlanta demanded.

"Atlanta? We didn't have school today" I replied, worriedly.

"Oh" sighted Atlanta.

"Can I bring you something?" I demanded.

"Yes, water to drink and bring me the meter (a thing to check how are you in the temperature), please?" replied a sick Atlanta.

"Yes, my love" I said, as what I just said.

"I love you, too dork" laughed Atlanta, weakly. As I entered the bathroom, I started to hear the song "Temperature" by Sean Paul.

[Intro:]
The gal dem Schillaci...Sean da Paul
So me give it to...so me give to...so me give it to...to all girls
Five million and forty naughty shorty...
Baby girl...all my girls..all my girls...Sean da Paul sey...

[Chorus:]
Well woman the way the time cold I wanna be keepin' you warm
I got the right temperature for shelter you from the storm
Oh lord, gal I got the right tactics to turn you on, and girl I...
Wanna be the Papa...You can be the Mom....oh oh!


Make I see the gal them bruk out pon the floor from you don't want no worthless performer
From you don't want no man wey can't turn you on gal make I see your hand them up on ya..
Can't tan pon it long.....naw eat no yam...no steam fish....nor no green banana
But down in Jamaica we give it to you hot like a sauna..

[Chorus]


Bumper exposed and gal you got your chest out but you no wasters cause gal you impress out...
And if you des out a me you fi test out,Cause I got the remedy to make you de-stress out....
Me haffi flaunt it because me God Bless out...And girl if you want it you haffi confess out...
A no lie weh we need set speed a fi test the mattress out..

[Chorus]


Gal don't say me crazy now, this strange love it a no Bridgette and Flava show..
Time fi a make baby now so stop gwaan like you a act shady yo...
Woman don't play me know, cause a no Fred Sanford nor Grady yo....
My lovin' is the way to go...my lovin' is the way to go.....

[Chorus]


When you roll with a player like me... with a bredda like me girl there is no other
No need to talk it right here just park it right here keep it undercover
From me love how you fit inna you blouse and you fat inna you jeans and mi waan discover..
Everything out you baby girl can you hear when me utter...

[Chorus]


Make I see the gal them bruk out pon the floor from you don't want no worthless performer
From you don't want no man wey can't turn you on gal make I see your hand them up on ya..
Can't tan pon it long.....naw eat no yam...no steam fish....nor no green banana
But down in Jamaica we give it to you hot like a sauna..

[Chorus]


"Where did that come from?" I wondered outloud. I came back with the stuff that Atlanta wanted.
"Did you hear the song, Archie?" asked Atlanta.

"Yes" I answered.

"I was the one who put it on" laughed Atlanta. I also laughed.

"Atlanta, there is something that I will show you and that you'll never forget" I said, winking at her.

"What is it?" asked Atlanta. I went near her. I could felt her hot breath on my neck. I so had to get my jacket off and finally I had kissed her... on the lips. It lasted a moment.

"Wow, Archie..." Atlanta said as she blushed.

"There, let's see what is your temperature" I suggested. I checked it it lowered.

"Ever since we kissed... it lowered" Atlanta said, loudly.

"Let's have another one for it lowers more" I said in a love expression.

"Alright" said Atlanta.

"Let's have you-know-what" I suggested, even more.

"Wow... sure" Atlanta said. And we did. And after, what happened? We repeated the song a million times. Theresa was Herry, Jay, Odie and Theresa that was annoyed to listen the same song and asking us to change another song (we paused for awhile) but we didn't answer back.

The next day...


"Hi, everyone" said a happy, Atlanta. Then she vomitted on the floor.

"Aww, cheezes" said a grossed, Neil.

"Herry, washed the floor" said a bossy, Theresa.

"Why, me-" started Herry, but stopped by Theresa's expression "Oh, fine".

"Are you, alright?" I asked, hurrying to Atlanta.

"I..." started Atlanta.

"Congrats you two" Theresa cheered.

"Why?" they asked at the sametime.

"You are gonna be parents" yelled Theresa "I'm also pregnant. But I'm 2 months".

"Oh, wow. Lannie, hear that?" I demanded, touching my girlfriends tummy.

"Yeah I've heared, but I thought we only wanted to lowered my temperature" said a shocked Atlanta.

"Looks we did more" I said, blushing.

"We will see what me and Theresa will have" Atlanta said, smiling at me.

9 months later...


"Congratulations, it's a girl" called the doctor to me and Atlanta "What would you name her?".

"I'm not strong, enough to live" Atlanta said, tears went down her cheeks "My temperature came back but more worser, so bad that I'm dying".

"No, Atlanta" I said, teary.

"Let's name her... June" Atlanta said, as she closed her eyes, forever.

"Farewell, Atlanta" I said with June in my arms. June had a tinybit of purple hair like mine with gray-ish eyes like her mom.

"Let's go, honey" I said to my new born daughter. Atlanta joined Theresa. Theresa died as she was giving birth to her son, Kevin. Kevin had bits of brown-ish hair like his dad and green eyes like his mom.

Afterwards...

Herry wasn't lucky either, his fiancée, Denise that died of illness while she gave birth to a son and a daughter, Maureen and Henry. Neil? Well, he had hidden something all they way. He had a girlfriend named Julie. Ofcourse she also died of giving birth to her and Neil's daughter, Evelyn. Evelyn had a bit of long black hair like her mom and blue eyes like her dad. Odie was the lucky one, his wife was Calypso and she was im-mortal, she gave birth to a son named Will. He looks mostly like his dad, except the eyes, the eye color is from his mom. What would happen next? To our lives? I wonder.
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P.S: Okay, I know. Yeah, after my sober eyes(except that's in my thoughts) because of my ex-teacher? I felt depressed a bit, so I wanted a tragedy kind of thing. So... I hope you enjoyed it, as much as wrote it.
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... please no rude comments:tears: Can someone tell me if it's not for everyone, please? Thank you.
It's my 1st fanfic or whatever on this site and in my new account and plus it's... my 1st favy show Class of the titans :blushes:
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~TheDragoness1992:iconTheDragoness1992: May 21, 2008, 4:32:12 PM
Aww, it's sad that Atlanta and Theresa die...but at least their children live on :)

A little teensy bit of advice, though: Watch out for mistakes. I saw a few in the text.

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~Toxic-Torrent:iconToxic-Torrent: May 21, 2008, 4:33:58 PM
Yeah I know, I didn't have time to check it or something like that, I found it rushy to me^^;

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~TotalDramaFan:iconTotalDramaFan: May 21, 2008, 7:38:51 PM
Nice i like class of the titans. I'm faving this.

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~Toxic-Torrent:iconToxic-Torrent: May 22, 2008, 1:56:50 PM
You like Class of the titans? I thought in the beggining you hated it:wow: I never knew you liked Class of the titans, wow. I :heart: CLASS OF THE TITANS!:headbang: But tdi rocks, too:headbang: as so 6TEEN!

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